Five Minute Friday: Close


“Foul ball.”

He steps out.   Positions his hips.   Raises his bat.   Swings against the air.  He steps back into the box again.  The pitch.  Whack!


Out of the box, position the hips, raise the bat, swing against the imaginary pitch, the ball sails over the fence.  He’s ready.

The pitch.
“Strike three.   Batter is out.”

Close.   He is so close.  He can imagine the ball leaving the infield.  He can imagine running the banana around first and down the line to second, rounding second onto third, leaving third, sliding into home.  But not this at bat.  This at bat was an out.

He walks back to the dugout.   A little spring has left his step.   His bat drags making a line in the dirt behind him.

Close.  But not yet.

Close.   He swung.

Close.   He can imagine the hit.  Bat making contact with the ball.

Close.  Closer to that first hit of the season.




3 thoughts on “Five Minute Friday: Close

  1. As parents, we wish so hard for them to get that hit, or whatever other milestone they are trying to meet. But sometimes just being close has to do, and the love of the journey enough to conquer the disappointment.

  2. I so loved this little window of a narrative.
    And I don’t even like or have a child who plays baseball!
    A great piece of writing that evoked vivid images and feelings.
    Visiting from 5minfri.

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